May 5th, 2010

Story Beginnings — Part 1

Next week I’ll be a part of the faculty at the Society for Children’s Book Writers and Illustrators (SCBWI) Spring conference in Portland, Oregon. Besides teaching various workshops, I have the privilege to participate in a WOW panel. In WOW, attendees pre-submit the first page of a manuscript. The first pages are read aloud (anonymously) and in random order, after which Scholastic editor Anna Bloom and I must respond. Distilled to its blunt essence, a WOW session asks the question, “Would you turn the page?”

Sounds straightforward, but alas, nothing is so easy. Aspiring writers aren’t the only ones who wear their hearts on their sleeves — even us old stogies can be like trembling rose petals waiting to be crushed. Responding to the pages in the WOW session will require honesty yet compassion. It will require an ear for good storytelling, recommendations for revision, mixed with the bunny-eat-bunny realities of the children’s publishing industry.

A few weeks ago I attended a “First Pages” session at an SCBWI conference in Redmond, Washington, in which Elizabeth Law of Egmont USA Publishing and literary agent Michael Bourret commented on the first pages. They must have read forty first pages, and out of those forty I could count only two in which I personally would have turned the page, and even those two didn’t blow me away. As I sat there, I kept wondering what was missing from those other thirty-eight. The answer was myriad and complicated, but also simple and at the heart of writing itself. And while I can’t answer my own question in the space of this one post, I propose to teach the elements of story beginnings in a series of weekly installments. So send a quick prayer up to the powers that be for my WOW session in Portland, and meanwhile, stay tuned . . .

April 20th, 2010

Writer Heroes of the Pacific Northwest

Maybe I’m tootin’ my own horn here, but I just have to say that the writing community here in the Pacific Northwest is pretty dang awesome. Not only are we a creative, friendly, and professional bunch, but we’re generous too.

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Not long ago, I asked my local writing community for book donations to help orphans in Tanzania. (Orphans Africa, a non-profit 501 (c) 3 charity which I co-founded, was having its first gala dinner and auction and we needed auction items.) Two days after I broadcast my plea, I received some beautiful autographed books. That was only the beginning. Over the next few weeks, autographed books flooded into my local post office, eliciting raised eyebrows from the postmaster as I walked out each day, arms piled high. Picture books, novels for children and adults, self-help books, inspirational books, chapter books for young readers . . . the writers of the Pacific Northwest sent their very best. Their generosity literally brought me to tears.

So this is my official group hug. To each of you who gave, thank you and God bless you. And for those of you who attended the auction and purchased book baskets, wow! We raised over $17,000 at our auction, enough to nearly complete a kitchen and dining hall at our IMG_2134nursery and primary boarding school for orphans! Even now, our official group hug is reaching across the ocean to embrace children who otherwise wouldn’t have a chance at a quality education. It is essential to their well-being to know that people care about them.

The following authors generously donated books. As an extended group hug, I invite you to visit their websites, peek around, and post your accolades and appreciation. They deserve it.

Kobbie Alamo

Andrea Torrey Balsara

Anjali Banerjee

Carole Stevens Bibisi

David Bouchard

Martha Brockenbrough

Royce Buckingham

Dia Calhoun

Janet Lee Carey

Nina Durfee

Marilou Flinkman

Heather Vogel Frederick

Kathryn Galbraith

Ron Hirschi

Peg Kehret

Judith Laik

Kirby Larson

Margaret Lippert

Susan Marlow

Clare Hodgson Meeker

Gretchen Olson

Craig Orback (illustrator)

Terry Persun

Colleen Reece

Joni Sensel

March 28th, 2010

Say You’re One of Them

Say You're One of Them Say You’re One of Them by Uwem Akpan


My rating: 5 of 5 stars
Even as one who has spent considerable time in Africa, “in the trenches,” so to speak, one who has many African friends, I cannot say that I truly understand Africans. Their different ways of thinking, their cultures, their perceptions, often leave me, a white Western woman, bewildered and exasperated. Should I spend the remainder of my life among them, I believe I would always be aware of the vast gulf of understanding that stands between us and my own ingrained and presumptive Western ideologies. That’s why it’s invaluable to run across a book that helps me to understand, as much as I am able, the African social and familial ideologies that so fundamentally differ from my own.

SAY YOU’RE ONE OF THEM by Uwem Akpan is a collection of five short stories, each written through the point-of-view of an African child. From the genocide in Rwanda to the epidemic of violence in Nigeria, the children narrate the events of their lives — the prejudices and fears, the joys and the horrors, through writing that is both vivid and stark. Born and raised in Nigeria, Akpan has truly captured the voice and heart of Africa’s children. Through their chatter, their confusion, their longings, and their grief, the children communicate universal needs: to be loved, to be secure, and to be happy.

When we allow ourselves to be as children, willing to give love and be loved unconditionally, then we embrace these universal needs as fundamental human rights. And when we do that, all ideologies that before stood like fortressed walls between us, crumble into dust.

Michele Torrey
www.orphansafrica.com

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February 11th, 2010

Techno Hate and Ink Pots

If you’ve been thinking that I’ve dropped off the edge of the planet, you’re right. I’ve been embroiled in some nasty computer issues. (Look closely enough, and you’ll see bald patches on my scalp where I’ve torn out my hair.) It all started about a year ago when I bought a new PC with a Vista operating system. Over the next few months it acted like a child throwing a tantrum. I took it in to the doctor for analysis, and it came back just as ornery as ever. So when I heard about the Windows 7 upgrade, I thought, yippee! My troubles are over! So in November I happily changed my operating system to Windows 7, not knowing that in that little green box was the devil incarnate, just waiting to send me and my computer to techno hell.

I’ll spare you the gory details. Suffice it to say that my new/old PC now lies smoldering in the dust heap, while I type this on my spanking new Macbook Pro. But I couldn’t leave the PC world behind entirely, no indeed. After all, the wheels of the publishing industry turn on PCs. It’s comply or die. So I solved my dilemma with a MAC program that allows me to run a virtual PC in my MAC. It’s literally two computers in one, and I’m loving it. I feel like I’ve awakened from a sweating, gripping nightmare to see the sun peeking over the horizon and hear the birds chirp.

All this has got me thinking. Just how and when did my life became so interconnected with computers, the Internet, and email? Just when did my entire day get flushed down the loo if my computer froze or had to spend a week with Dr. PC? Anymore my days consist of dozens of emails, electronic manuscripts, copyedits in WORD, htmls and pdfs and jpgs and tifs, chirps and tweets. In fact, there’s so much techno “support” for my career that I can hardly get any writing squeezed in there.

I’ve begun to pine for the good ol’ days, days when authors used ink pots and quill pens. When they didn’t have spell checker and actually had to get off their butts to pull the dictionary off the shelf. Mary Shelley was only twenty years old when she finished her novel, FRANKENSTEIN. As the story of its creation goes, it was a contest between friends as to who could write the scariest story. (Apparently they were holed up in some villa near Lake Geneva. The weather was nasty.) Now mind you, the contest was not who could watch the most movies, or who could post the most tweets, or who could text the fastest, but who could write the scariest story. Kind of scary when you think about it. A whole bunch of people choosing to go to their separate rooms and simply write. With old-fashioned ink on old-fashioned paper. Probably illumined by the light of an oil lamp. On a hard chair.

Thinking of Mary Shelley, I sometimes wonder if I’ve lost my center. Any time a piece of machinery can hold the key to my happiness/success/productivity (circle one), then something’s seriously out of whack. I don’t know the answers. I’ll think about it. I think it’s all tied up with future progress somehow. Like we’re all headed somewhere important and only computers can take us there. Meanwhile, I’ve got some tweeting to do. And laundry. But this evening I think I’ll kick back and read FRANKENSTEIN. Should be easy enough. After all, it’s on my Kindle.

January 7th, 2010

Historical Research Q&A Part II

In response to yesterday’s blog post (Historical Research Q&A), someone asked me the following:

Q: I’m wondering how to best organize and keep track of my research. I could do it by putting everything in computer folders, say one for each location. Then, I’ll need a plot and subplot folder, one for laws of the period, a character folder…it goes on. How do you keep it all organized and accessible? Of course I am documenting my sources so I can find them again. So I guess my question is more about how to manage what I find. I want the information at my fingertips, but don’t want to write an elaborate index.

This is a toughie, but I think I’ve got it licked. How best to do it might depend upon the size of your project. Someone has suggested using Microsoft OneNote or similar program. This is probably a good suggestion, especially if the project is fairly modest in size. However, my research methods predate Microsoft OneNote, so I’m afraid I might be a bit antiquated in my methods. Antiquated or not, I’ve developed a method in which I can keep years of notes organized and accessible at a moment’s notice, using WORD, or a similar program.

When I first receive material, let’s say THE CIVIL WAR by Geoffrey Ward, I start by entering it into my Bibliography (Bib), the first document I will create. Every subsequent work I study goes into the Bib. This way I never lose track of what I’ve read, and my Bib will be comprehensive and ready to send to an editor if they ask for it. I include websites, journal articles, newspaper articles, etc., in my Bib. Once I’ve recorded THE CIVIL WAR book in my Bib, I start reading.

When I find some tidbit I want to keep, for example, info on the Battle of Port Hudson, I create a WORD document called “Port Hudson.” I’ll file this document under a more general folder I’ve created called, “CIVIL WAR.” In the Port Hudson document I then notate my source plus the corresponding page number. If it’s a small paragraph of info, I’ll just type it into the document. Better yet, my computer has speech recognition software, so I just read the paragraph and let my computer do the work. When finished my Port Hudson document will look something like this:

CIVIL WAR (Ward) 137: The battle of Port Hudson was one of the major  . . . blah blah blah.

Then, as I read on, whenever I run across additional information on Port Hudson, I’ll add it to the Port Hudson document. This is true even as I move on to other sources. All Port Hudson material, regardless of source, will end up in that document.

If the document starts to get cumbersome– now, let’s say, it’s 20 pages long– I might further divide it into subdocuments, organized under a new folder called Port Hudson (a subfolder of the CIVIL WAR main folder). In this case, examples of sub-document titles might be: General Dwight, Day of Surrender, Daily Life, Siege, Rations, and so on.

A year later when I need information on what my character might eat at the battle at Port Hudson, I open my Civil War/Port Hudson/Rations document, and there is all the information I want, with all the various sources documented, including page numbers in case I ever need to go back and reread something. When you organize in this way, years of research can literally be at your fingertips in SECONDS.

When you first start researching you might be a little hazy as to how to organize and what to name your folders. Not to worry– just do the best you can, knowing that as you go along you can further refine your folders and documents.

Sometimes there are entire chapters (or more) of a source that I want to keep on hand. Rather than dictate twenty pages into my computer, I’ll do one of three things: 1) Depending on how important the source is and how much I think I’ll use it in the future, I may purchase the material. In my WORD document I will then notate something like the following: “CIVIL WAR (Ward) — see pages 148-172 for detailed info on the siege at Port Hudson”; 2) If the source is online at www.questia.com, I can bookmark anything I want and simply notate the bookmark in my WORD document; 3) I’ll photocopy the needed chapter(s) and store them in a 3-ring binder. On the spine of the binder I’ll write a shorthand note as to what is in the notebook. (I might have multiple sources in one notebook.) Then I’ll make a corresponding note in my Port Hudson document as to where to find the information, etc., and what the information is regarding. Again, regardless of which option I choose, the information is available to me within seconds.

To answer your question regarding character and plot folders, yes, you’re right on. I have folders called “Plot” and “Characters” and even “Storage” with all of my discarded drafts further divided into chapters for easy retrieval. Organize your folders in whatever way makes sense to you. As far as elaborate indexes, I don’t use an index at all — my folders are organized intuitively. In other words, I’m not going to look for information on the battle of Port Hudson under a folder titled “Religion,” but will head for the “Civil War” folder instead.

Hope that helps! If anyone else out there has another method that has worked for them, I’m all ears. Happy researching!